tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14843388.post5308560055866520265..comments2012-09-13T08:43:09.365-07:00Comments on Deceptive Small Cars: The Blog of Jeffrey Lee Blake: A Story Idea By Sara Allsop from two years ago.Jeff Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08445021799497926913noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14843388.post-6664486058694560102008-02-11T22:52:00.000-08:002008-02-11T22:52:00.000-08:00I think it's funny. At first I wasn't sure if it w...I think it's funny. At first I wasn't sure if it was supposed to be a comedy. I think you should play up more on the stereotypes, and make it a tad more ridiculous. Make it sound maybe like it was written by a white man who has no idea what he's talking about?Jeff Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08445021799497926913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14843388.post-71131425733618358202008-02-11T22:51:00.000-08:002008-02-11T22:51:00.000-08:00Thanks, I probably should. I want people reading i...Thanks, I probably should. I want people reading it to be a bit unsure at first if it is supposed to be funny or not, but by the end I want it to be rediculous, clearly, yet subtly...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com